Okay, I just finished a new song. :D

Well, I don't know if it's the final version yet, but I could use some critiquing, I don't really know how to judge my own music, between what's good/bad (everybody says I'm always too harsh, lol). The pause in the middle is because in order to get the music to work, I have to put a measure before the music, or it always pulls this BS by playing the music from the middle of the song, but I know a way around when I actually post it for good.

TL;DR, if somebody wants to help me out, maybe say what should be fixed, if it sounds alrigth so far, or if it's garbage, and I should scrap and restart, simply leave a post here. Thanks!

Where can I listen to this song?

Well, since you posted, I will upload it.

I have two versions:

1.) Normal.

2.) Midi format.

They will both be there, I will post the videos right now.

Lol, wait, nvm about the midi one, it's not being nice right now, lol.

Normal.

Alright. It's still processing.

Here it is!



Watch, so I can delete it.

No complaints or advice

I really liked it though I do think you should have started with a different tune after the 2 second pause and then go back into the base theme. Other than that minor little gripe I did like it.

I'll delete it in 5 minutes! If you want to check it out, then do so now.

Alright, thanks, I will probably change it.

It would be good as a background song for a game or movie. My friend does a lot of electronic music with fruity loops or something. He'd know more than me.

Thanks!

Also, it's not loops either. I actually composed every note.

Why do you keep deleting them? I have yet to hear one of your songs.

But I feel like it doesn't have the... "oomph" or whatever so stand alone. It's good, but it feels like the bass of a song; it should be in the background with maybe something with a little higher treble (i think that's the word) or a little more loud and upfront covering it.

I thought so too. It's pretty difficult, because of the program I have; it has a lot of more delicate sounds, as opposed to loud ones. I'll try to add to that though, thanks.

Higu, I'll send you a link to a topic I had with all my music, then you can tell me what you think. Send me a message on LIVE, or just send me a party invite; it says I'm offline, but I'm really not. It's just to keep people from constantly bothering me when I play FO.

I never saw it D:

Sorry, I didn't want to leave it on my main channel

It wasn't that great anyways. It needs to be fixed.

Oh, okay..