Book I
This is still under development mind you.
Role of the Espins: The Espins count themselves as guardians and protectors of the lands in which their once vast empire spanned. They are the unseen guardians of the lesser races, and operate covertly through masterful usage of deception and disguise. They monitor their descendents, ensuring that they do not follow the same path that they did and ensure that the secrets of their empire are never fully discovered, keeping the means to manufacture their capsules just barely out of reach, promoting different methods to manipulate and harness magic.
In this way, the Espins have ensured the Rending does not repeat itself, an event that doomed their race and their enemies to their bleak existence that they now endure.
The Espins know that the mistakes that they made while meddling with the intricacies of magic should not be repeated, and have taken it upon themselves to ensure that their knowledge is not abused, and while their use of magic was ultimately led to their downfall, they believe the lesser races and their descendants may still be able to use it. They manipulate and influence politics and many facets of life behind the scenes, where they’ve infiltrated and planted themselves in kingpin positions. Everything from king to lowly fisherman, they are everywhere and nowhere at the same time, always watching, always searching for the first sign that those who they keep watch over start to stray down a dangerous path.
For centuries the Espins have successfully managed to manipulate the nations and guide them away from the darker secrets of Espin history,
They are a dyeing race, and over the hundreds of years that they’ve managed to successfully fulfill their self proclaimed duties, their numbers have now fallen to the point that they are no longer able to provide the necessary impact in order to influence the nations decisions as they were in the past.
Because of this they are beginning to become desperate, willing to go to any length to ensure that the younger races do not discover their role and how they’ve shaped their futures up until now.
Their chief concern revolves around a Dragen scholar and retired solider, Valkerus Von Caldreia, the foremost scholar and researcher of the Dragen high weavers.
**Book I**
The story starts with Elios visiting Valks his mentor and closest friend. After some small talk, Elios mentions that tension is rising with the other two major powers Gol’Kathka and the Anistol’Solvir Republic. Valks being distracted by his work simply grunts at him stating that these kinds of things have been going on for decades and likely, due to the status quo, nothing will really change.
A little bit of chamber bickering, perhaps a deal or compromise made here or there and everything will settle down until the next pointless and futile argument or event starts the process all over again.
Elios laughs and queries about what Valks is doing, to which Valks states that he is looking into the notes of some of this predecessors looking for reference or clues to a particularly troubling problem.
Elios at this point just nods and comments on that Valks needed to get out more often, staying cooped up in his study couldn’t possibly be healthy for him. Valks states that he’s seen much of the world while serving in the Dragen military, and that he is quite content burying himself in books and that in doing so he is not only keeping busy since his retirement, but that he’s potentially helping the Dragen people if such time leads to him discovering something to make life easier.
Elios shrugs and states that he does have a point, but insists that he needs to get out at least some time. It then dawns on Elios that a new set of ruins were discovered and that a colleague of his was working the site and that it would likely be a welcomed surprise if he were to be present to offer his input. This piques Valk’ interest, and he agrees that perhaps Elios is right and that he should get out more.
Valks packs some essential items and the next day the two of them head out to the excavation site. They meet up with a fellow scholar, whom is clearly surprised and pleased to see Valks at the dig site with him. He elaborates that he thinks he’s found an old archive, quite remarkable considering how intact it was and could be a discovery that will keep people like him and Valks busy for decades. Ecstatic over this revelation, Valks expresses his thanks to Elios for making him come out to the dig site. A few days pass and the excavation reveals that the ruins are indeed an archive, the scholar is then called to the ruins to look take a look at something that was recently unearthed, Valks states he needs to attend to something and will head to the ruins in a moment. Unfortunately, he would never get the chance, as a group of raiders assault the excavation site hoping for some easy plunder. Elios and Valks leap into action rallying the outnumbered guards in an effort to fend off the oncoming assault. While they are successful at repelling the attack, their efforts were not enough to prevent casualties. A stray spell strikes the entry way of the ruins and causes a cave which kills their friend who was investigating the ruins. With the archives destroyed and the lead researcher dead, the excavation was called off.
Elios and Valks return to town and share a sobering moment, Valks lamenting the loss of a friend and partner in their quest for knowledge. Elios while sharing a drink with Valks in silence and looking at paintings of his family comments by stating that it was tragic what happened to their friend and states that the timing couldn’t have been better or in this case worse. Safety measures were not able to be established at the time and he inquires to Valks about how another scholar and researcher met a similar kind of end a couple of years ago.
Valks comes to a realization and then inquires that it is a shame and then asks Elios about the passing of his parents who also were scholars that served in the Dragen military.
Elios states that all he remembers is that they were killed in a landslide shortly after a big discovery at a dig site, the ruins being destroyed in the process.
Vindicated by this information Valks reqeusts to be "Left to his thoughts" in which Elios somberly takes his leave.
Over the next couple of weeks Elios scarcely hears from his old mentor and friend, whispers of his obsession getting worse and rumors of insanity started floating around until one of his comrades in arms Mac'tyr inquired about how "The old man" was doing. Elios simply states he's not sure, he hasn't spoken with Valks much since the death of their fellow scholar. Mac'tyr expresses his concern about whats been going around and how distant Valks has become and requests Elios to check in on him.
Elios agrees and decides to pay Valks a visit once again. Upon his arrival and entry into Valks home he is presented with a venerable maze of books and a spectacular web of string pinned to various articles and portraits of famous scholars, nobles and entrepreneurs. Valks greets him clearly frazzled and disheveled if not a bit manic in his current disposition.
Valks expresses his surprise at seeing elios and mentions cheerfully that he would have made tea if he had known he was coming and perhaps tidied up the place. Elios a little taken aback at Valks' current living conditions inquires about what the web is all about.
Perking up like a dog being presented with a bone Valks quickly guides Elios through the elaborate tabernacle of thread. He then goes on to explain how numerous individuals in history especially those that promoted, studied or worked in the advancement of the magical arts all after a certain point in their research met an untimely end. the strings met each drew the connections between hundreds of individuals showing while seemingly unconnected there was indeed a great deal of evidence that there was a much more sinister force at hand that clearly did not want man to continue to advance in the art of weaving. Elios clearly concerned with where Valks was going with this patiently listened hoping dearly that he was wring.
Valks explainations pointed to the fact that despite the extremely strict census records that the empire holds on its population, that a great number of the individuals that were in direct positions of power could not track their lineage to any of the original founders which is odd considering the hierarchical approach to Dragen society. Valks goes on to state that every line has had one thing in common and that all these events typically followed a very linear path of one selection of families that had distant connections with all the individuals that either died or went missing, including Elios's parents. All there families were high ranking officials within the major powers of some sort in either business or within the government.
Elios at this point has heard enough and stated that this is madness boardering on treason. To accuse someone of the high orders of such treachery was a tall charge indeed.
*This is where I'm having trouble*
Skipping ahead at this point
After Valks manages to release the energies of a remote capsule and effectively "flooding" a large area with magical energy (which can be lethal by the way if exposure to it is prolonged) it becomes clear to Empire that this is no longer a national matter but a problem that has the potential to threaten all the countries.
That being the case two representatives from each nation along with a few others where then charged with the duty of finding and stopping Valks before he repeats this act but within the reaches of a populated area.
Among those who would accompany Elios are as follows.
*Note: I have yet to develop all of their bios*
♀ Talvir Vas Siidra: A well known and celebrated scholar and instructor within the Anistol’Solvir republic; Talvir is best known for contributing to the development and further refinement of the weaving techniques pioneered by Kora Vas Maltyr, a style of weaving which has become the staple and standard method of weaving for the Solvirian Republics, Antaal (Ahn-tahl) combat weavers. Talvir hails from a family of renowned blacksmiths, who specialize in the forging of the formidable war glaives, halberds and spears that make up the bulk of the Antaal’ arsenal. While disappointed that his daughter would not be carrying on the family craft, Talvir’s father Tolvir Vas Siidra gave his eldest daughter his blessing when she decided to pursue the art of weaving instead of smithing. Stern and unapologetically direct, Talvir is indeed the reason why the Solvirian navy remains to be one of the finest in all of Tyr’val, due in no small part to Talvir’ keen sense of tactics and strategy on the high seas.
♂ Vintova Vas Tolmiir:
♂ Kalim Gol Heidras
♀ Svintra Gol Nyxserra: (Svin-trah gol Nicks-sehrah)
♂ Mac'Tyr Von Logall:
These six individuals along with several other support characters (Who I have yet to name) set out to find and stop Valks.
*I've yet to fully flesh this part out mind you*
As the story progresses, Elios encounters the realities of what his empire is really like. Abuse of power, deception and betrayal among many other darker aspects of man who are willing to do anything in pursuit of their ambitions.
Elios slowly starts to develop doubts, as he chases after Valks who claims that magic is the root of the problem, and while not evil, it is something that all of the nations have become too reliant on and is causing the degredation of society as friends will turn on each other father will betray sons and blood is spilled all in the pursuit of attaining even more of this seemingly endless power.
Elios is constantly dragged deeper and deeper into darkness, and his beliefs that he is doing the right thing is constantly being tested. Eventually after fighting numerous followers of Valks elios is finally faces Valks forces in bitter combat, but due to his own arrogance and desire to prove something to himself he makes a fatal tactical mistake while trying to push in for the kill on Valks forces. Ultimately his mistake costs the lives of an entire unit under his command, their lieutenant in fact being a Talvir Vas Siidra, a women who he grew to love as he traveled with her (Though it was never admitted by either of them and nothing truly intimate really occurred between them, it was a visibly mutual feeling)
Her death coming at the hands of one of Valks' closest and most loyal followers a *blind weaver by the name of Svania Val'tol (Actually she's not truly blind, she can see so long as there is enough magical energy around here, areas like where the nation of Kyr'tol used to be which is void of magic, leaves her blind as any other normal person. This is a trait unique to her race, more elaboration on this will come at another date).
Devastated at this loss Elios is not sure what to do with himself at this point losing all confidence in himself as a leader. After some time, Svintra comes to comfort him(she's a little older than Elios, but like Talvir, has developed feelings for him, though she never acted on them). She assures Elios that Talvir's death was not his fault, and that he needs to be strong in this time of sorrow, she goes on to state that the women who killed Talvir is to blame but more importantly, she asks who was the one who forced his hand, who is the one who ultimately forced him to fight back, the one who ultimately gave the order for the girl to fight him and the rest of the group. Valks is the real person at fault and he needs to pay for his crimes. Vindicated at this realization and filled with rage, Elios vows to track down Valks and kill him and make him pay for the crimes that he's committed against both him and the empire.
*Details still are being worked on from here as well*
Elios fights his way onwards in his quest to find Valks and avenge the one he loved while at the same time he is slowly able to heal those wounds as he begins to grow fonder and more intimate with Svintra. He discovers that the Espins really were responsible for killing his parents, and he ultimately develops a deep hatred for them as he concludes that they are ultimately the reason for all his suffering. It was because of them that his closest mentor Valks was driven into insanity which in turn led to the death of the one he loved. In the last major fight of the first book (this is up in the air, I'm not sure if I want to make this part into two books extending what initially was going to be a trilogy into something more) Elios successfully defeats Valks forces at a major capsule, driving him away, but not before he was half way through the process of releasing the energies within.
While attempting to reverse the process, he is suddenly ambushed though Svintra takes the brunt of the attack and falls mortally wounded when she attempts to protect him from the surprise assault.
Injured it is revealed to Elios that Mac'tyr has betrayed him. Mac'tyr reveals that his true mission was to essentially martyr Elios, to give the empire a reason to go to war with the Gol'kathken dominion, with both him and Svintra dead he could lay claim that the "Hero of Tyr'val" was felled by Kathken treachery, no one would question it, for they were all heroes and he'd have "No reason to lie". The capsule they were trying to "save" was also close to a major Kathken military fortress, and it's tragic loss, despite there efforts would not be blamed on the empire due to their previous actions (Elios is not always successful through out the book at stopping Valks, the death of Talvir is a good example of one such failed attempt to prevent the releasing of a capsule)
Elios in a fit of rage, engages Mac'tyr in a long and vicious fight, eventually felling him. battered and broken he manages to make his way over to Svintra, who's vitals are fading rapidly. Despair falling over him once again at failing to protect the ones he holds dear, shock still settling in as everything he fought for is coming crashing down around him, Elios' final straw of sanity breaks with the revelation that Svintra is in fact, an Espin spy. Rage replacing sorrow, she reveals that she was sent to monitor him and ensure that he succeeded in stopping Valks, but at the same time didn't learn too much about their history or technology. If he did she was to kill him at the end of their mission. Fury over taking him Elios rages and questions if everything that shes done for him was a lie, was the intimacy all just a ruse. Svintra vehemently denies it all, stating that she indeed fell in love with him and that she chose to try to save him over her races official charge. Elios doesn't hear this of course blinded by his hate of the Espin race and the trauma of losing everything he held dear.
Attempting to rationalize it he comes to one final conclusion, one so simple while looking at the levers and faint glow of magical energy that adjust the intake of magic within the capsule.
Magic was the problem, Valks was right, it's the ultimate core problem of everything, without magic the Espins would never have constructed these contraptions, without magic their wars would never had occurred, without it their empire would not have crumbled, leading to their manipulation of society and the fall of his master, the death of his lover and ultimately the betrayal of his once best friend and that of his country. It all made sense, and the only solution is to get rid of it. At this point Elios makes a decision, the only way to stop the madness, was to eliminate magic in its entirety, to purge the land of its taint. To do this, he began the process of overloading the capsule, the result would leave the land similar to that falls within the the scar of the Rending, completely void of magic. And while many will die, he will ultimately be saving hundreds of thousands if not hundreds of millions of lives from the corrupting taint that is magic.
Thus ends book 1